Pleasure and pain

Little drops of rain, gliding on window panes
Surging passion in our veins
Ah the  pleasure.. Ah the pain
Passion surging in our veins
On the window panes gliding, little drops of rain


Written for : NAISAIKU WEEK X



  1. – -” Ah the pleasure.. Ah the pain_ _
    little drops of rain ” – –

    .- communication occurs –
    ~ when the words have something to say_
    & there’s something to listen to ..

    – -thanks for sharing this..

  2. Nice poem. I see the auther has written in rhyming coplets. it has this horniness to it. Interesting….

  3. something subtly magnetic in the syntax of the poem’s last line! Liked the verse:)

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