3WW-Naisaiku

Persistent dreams interfere with callous reality.
Tumultous thoughts embroil in the inroads of my mind
Life, a will o’ wisp!
The inroads of my mind embroil in tumultous thoughts.
Callous reality interfere with persistent dreams.
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5 Comments

  1. Well done – I like the way you’ve incorporated the prompt words into this form –

  2. I really liked how you took the first line and recast its meaning in the last. Nice.

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