Naisaiku Challenge- Week II

Absolve me of aberrant afflictions
Insanity reigns with impervious ignominy
My Lucid Sanity Lives
With impervious ignominy,Insanity reigns
Of aberrant afflictions, absolve me!

Prompted at : Naisaiku Challenge

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10 Comments

  1. You’ve got some big words going on here and perhaps it’s the writers cry to his/her maker which is the starting point for this fine piece of poetry. I like the way you’ve used the re-verse verse and gently worded it to suit the mood.

  2. Lovely, Liked the concept of ablution in absolution..
    Nice word play and puntuation-play too..:) πŸ˜€
    Good One!

  3. This really makes it’s point, but I think I’ll stick with ‘Bless me father for I have sinned’

  4. i’ve really started likin these Naisaiku’s of urs…really intriguin

  5. the words got stuck in my throat Poohees, can’t swallow. please give me some water.
    Now i have to go back to school.
    i am such a dimwit Poohee sweet.
    you will be shocked to know how little i knows.
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    i don even knows how to puttees a smiley there, that was a smiley.

  6. so passionate! so beautiful!

  7. Thank you Sweet talking guy.. I am kind of falling for this form greatly πŸ˜€

    Wenda thank you πŸ™‚

    Bharat thank you so! I really appreciate your comments πŸ˜€

    Stan πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ Thats easier I agree he he

    mayz oh thats so sweet of you! I am loving this form a lot too πŸ˜€

    Rauf ah you humble me so! What you know in richness of your life.. I can never ever scale upto it.. but thank you so much for being so sweet πŸ™‚

    Illeen thank you πŸ˜€

    Raaji welcome to my blog and thank you πŸ™‚

  8. πŸ™‚ Ha, I never even realized they were the same words till I read the whole thing again. Very beautiful.

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