Is It Worth The Trouble?

Candid confessions!
A miscalculated risk
My impulsive honesty
Is It Worth The Trouble?
My impulsive honesty
A miscalculated risk-
Candid confessions!

Prompted at: 3WW

Not really satisfied by this.. may be will re touch it later 🙂

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15 Comments

  1. i didnt quite kno wat Naisaiku is till i read ur posts…vy well written

  2. i am always too honest. both honesty and lies are risk 😦

  3. Thank you Mayz 🙂

    Floreta true! same here!

    Anthony yes.. too much of anything is not good! but honesty has this veneer of goodness.. i wonder how good is it!

    Pratsie! yesh yesh!

    Daily panic 🙂 welcome to my blog

  4. Good job! I haven’t tried this form you – you are good at it.

  5. An interesting form. I like the miscalculated risk–that’s the crux of the poem for me. I’m not sure I get the question in the middle.

  6. quite creative! 🙂

  7. These are quite hard to pull of well, and I think you’ve hit the mark you were aiming for. I wouldn’t change a thing.

  8. I like this style … some I have read but didn’t get it … but this one is good. I am going to try it as soon as I read all the details on how to do it.

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