Desire…


Crumpled sheets portray
Failed
nerves; they conceal-
my
illicit desire

Prompted at : 3WW

And also submitted at : Monday poetic train

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14 Comments

  1. The final line is where this takes off. Any chance of changing form and lengthening this?

  2. I’m with Susan; I’d love for this to go on for several more stanzas. It’s just so well-crafted.

  3. Sweet talking guy thank you 🙂

    floreta.. tumblewords.. thank you so!

    Tomg i shall certainly try to ..

    pratsie thnx 🙂

    Meera welcome to my blog 🙂

    Feldging poet thanx 😀

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