A regret

A regret I have,
Held it secretly, all this while
I wish I had
Something to remember you through,
A picture, some words
Is it too much to ask ?

A whisper,
deep in my heart,
I would never need anything,
To remind me of you
For you pervade,
my very being!

And yet,
I so wish,
You felt the same too!

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4 Comments

  1. “wish I had
    Something to remember you through,
    A picture, some words
    Is it too much to ask ?” – I have beauteous words but lost a picture as my phone chose to behave erratically 😦

    “And yet,
    I so wish,
    You felt the same too!” –

    In silence
    This is the eternal pain:
    For because it is unknown
    Mutual goodwills too
    Shall bereft of breaths
    Fall like frustrated leaves
    At autumn’s touch!

    • Fall like frustrated leaves
      At autumn’s touch!

      And yet falling in itself holds a story
      Of betrayal and trust
      Of love lived n lost
      Of moments in all their glory 🙂

  2. reading a month per day… and though the verses are prolific in number and purely delectable to read, their simplicity and brevity still make them easy to go through. Hope to finish up on the archives some time.

    “In rhythm and rhyme rich
    Through forms farmed fine
    In meanings meticulous yet maundering too
    And animated lives abridged
    In a moment of truth –
    The writing, the awakening of every word –
    Still hold a smidgen back
    And something gives:
    “My abstract irrelevance
    Or distracted irreverence?” I ask:
    Analysis spoils the day
    And another soulless verse is born
    To be wasted in my wintry mind
    On wintry nights through wintry deserts!” – sorry for that personal indulgence: really feel soulless about my writings most of the time and wanted to capture it in a spontaneous unthought final-comment-for-the-night errand!

    • Believe me I am so touched that you would want to read it through. How do I express it?

      There is nothing more fulfilling than to see your work appreciated.. like you seem to appreciate.. thank you so so very much!

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