Deception

In life’s myriad schemes
Like chameleons in panic,
Deceptions we create!

Prompted at : 3WW
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4 Comments

  1. Meena, this is really a nice, tight poem. I like how you’ve crafted the words. One critical remark, I think it would read better as chameleons, sted the singular. What do you think?

  2. I think you are right 🙂 and I am taking your suggestion! I wish I could fit in “Like a chameleon in panic” but the syllable count will go wrong 🙂

    So will take your suggestion 🙂

    I used singular to show that I am singular.. i didn’t generalize it.. now i will 🙂

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