Unwritten

Liquid skies capricious – titillatingly crimson
Blushing clouds enthralled- at the horizon

When a poem was not written………..

A couple nudged closer somewhere

Enkindled passion rage without any care

Two silhouettes entwined- smitten

Lost in memories unbeknownst
Tethered at the edge , tears glistened

The poem remained unwritten
….

P.S: This type of poetry is called nove otto.. came across it at Poefusion . Such poems are of 9 lines with the rhyme scheme as aacbbcddc with each line of 8 syllables πŸ™‚
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18 Comments

  1. Simply beautiful, especially I liked the last three lines πŸ™‚

  2. some memories stay unbroken
    some problems stay unresolved
    some hopes stay undiminished…

    the un-phenomena is so fascinating…

  3. d last 2 paras confused me…rnt they a kinda oxymoron???

    but a beautiful amalgamation of words…loved d flow!!!

    ps: u been awarded on my blog πŸ™‚

  4. Oh wow! but you know, the poem was written and in your beautiful words too.Really liked this one Winnie:)

  5. Alok! Thank you πŸ™‚

    John! how true! these ‘un’ words say our life stories.. the stories that r generally hidden πŸ™‚

    Pratsie! thank you πŸ™‚

    Mayz… It was my attempt to capture my mood at “sunset in ulsoor lake” .. the first stanza describes the water.. the second the lovers out there πŸ˜‰

    The last was for my yearning for what was…

    Mithe πŸ™‚ Thank you dear.. well it has been written yes… but many ‘perfect moments’ do go unwritten no?

  6. beautiful yaar…picturesque setting and moving words! πŸ™‚

  7. dropped in again to wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009 and
    a new poem is up at my place for “Poetry Train.” It’s a low pressure type of writer’s online group. ANYONE can join. Please consider it. See the preface to my poem about it and the link on my blog. πŸ™‚
    Your write beautiful poetry and would fit right in. Anyone, no matter whether it’s his or her first poem ever written is invited to join.

    I Want to Hold Your Hand

  8. wOw…liked the new pattern…

    will google more facts about nove otto…

    And as always the words and expressions are beautiful..

  9. Gel I will soon post there :)And happy new year to you πŸ˜€

    Sid thank you!

    Uddy! thank you!

  10. nove otto??

    good form…i’ll try it sometime soon, but i find syllable fitting difficult sometimes…! πŸ™‚

    loved the poem a lot…! πŸ™‚

  11. I shall just submit an understanding “silence” and an eye flecked with a blot of bleariness for this poem. anything else will spoil it.

    “titillatingly crimson”? – bold but also subtle

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