Vanilla Sky

In my own vanilla sky,
I search
Few shades of you

Between the lines,
Lost,
A hidden meaning

I try to decipher
Us
In this convoluted poem

Jealous green
mingle with neglected dreams
In the nebulous clouds

I hesitate
Through the star studded night
To find you

Prompted at : ABC Wednesday and 3WW

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27 Comments

  1. double prompt eh??

    well the poem was double fantastic!! and the pic double beautiful!! πŸ™‚

    nicely penned poohi!! πŸ™‚

  2. wow… this was really good πŸ˜€ … although i hate the phrase ‘vanilla sky’ πŸ˜›

  3. Thank you vinay πŸ™‚

    Sneha.. I know pretty cliched πŸ™‚

    ThomG thank you πŸ™‚

  4. Nicely done! I particularly like the phrase ‘few shades of you’.

  5. Shabdo ka bohot hi sundar taana baana :)( I hope you do understand what I just said).. Beautiful poem & I also truly love the entire feel of your blog..

    Blessed Be,
    Meow

  6. a sad melancholy daydream maybe? a dreamer with a hesitated heart? maybe I’m reading too much into this, anyway, good take on the combined prompts

  7. Double Wow for the picture and the poem. Lovely post.

    From the ABC Team thank you for sharing!

  8. me thinks perhaps you should look for a more flavorful piece of sky……

  9. In my own vanilla sky,
    I search
    Few shades of you

    Lovely very soothing …
    jealosu green … that was cute actually…
    Tc…
    πŸ™‚

  10. Just one word for this piece of art.. ‘Pensive’..

    Nice one… seems like there is a dark meaning hidden within those lines.. well, my perspective, maybe..

    A’ways Cheers!! Happy holidays..

    Fiducia a.k.a Angel

  11. beautiful reflection of loving another in a vanilla sky…

  12. Thank you so much for the response!

    I am sorry am late in the response *sigh*

    Tumblewords I am glad you liked it

    Meow.. I love the phrase blessed be.. very witchy like.. u into wiccan culture kya? I did u\s and thnx for the compliments! keep visiting πŸ™‚

    quin browne jealous of what?

    Lissa.. I am myself not sure of it .. it was one of those days πŸ™‚ but yeah melancholy is there for sure πŸ™‚

    Angel earthlingorgeous thank you so much!

    chrisy its my pleasure πŸ™‚

    Paisley you are right.. i shud after all sky is so vast .. but sometimes one particular piece of it becomes urs no matter what..

    Anoop why do u think its confused? R and J thank you.. i have not clicked it sadly.. but I love sky watching!

    Indrajit thank you πŸ™‚

    jealous green and kewt ? lol!

    gautami and antigoni thank you for stopping by πŸ™‚

    fiducia and one more believer.. thank you so! πŸ™‚

  13. My Dear Winnie,

    I am not into the Wicca but yes, it does enthrall me & I picked up the phrase "blessed be" from a blogger friend of mine, just got so stuck to it, simply love it πŸ™‚

    Blessed Be,
    Meow

  14. “Between the lines,
    Lost,
    A hidden meaning” – a poetic philosophy I love to hear being written about as I do it too. Elsewhere, Derrida talks of meanings breaking between and beyond words (signifiers/ signifie)

    I try to decipher
    Us
    In this convoluted poem

  15. “I try to decipher
    Us
    In this convoluted poem” – top class but funny you should mention convolutions when your verses are pristinely simple and aesthetically joyous!

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