A blinking dot,
Traverse,
through the white nothingness

A nudge here,
A drop there
A life breathes

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12 Comments

  1. day by day its getting difficult to comprehend your compositions…

    u have lot of explaination to give.

    ps. wht abt breezer date???

  2. u r on dear! 😀 😀

    lemme call ya now.. and plan 😉

  3. amusing ….

    now read this :

    A thoghut,a smile,
    amused i am,for what you write…
    you want to know what i read here?
    i still can not decide….
    What to understand,
    and what to leave behind ?

  4. emotions flow
    with every line
    whatever u write,
    u write so fine 🙂

    vinay.

  5. i think you might have a different intention in mind while writing this, but i interpreted it differently … itz fantastic watsoeva 😛

  6. hmmm.. i keep guessing what this particular work means… is it a egg, or is it a birth of a baby.. please.. do tell me… i’m breaking my head

  7. @uddy where is our breezer date or rather when ??

    @sid thnx 🙂

    @ Usha! Thank you 🙂

    @pratsie.. ah thats a lovely impromptu verse… take whatever you can and leave nothing behind 😛 😛

    @sneha.. acc to me.. a poetry shud mean diff things to diff people.. if mine induced to interpret it differently.. then its like i have been successful 🙂 Do tell me about your interpretation!

    @aki.. its just a dot.. on the computer screen.. a pixel may be 😀

    @neeru! You try so hard to find complicated meanings while the answer is so simple 😛

  8. shards of deep things entwined deliberately within the ambit of very few words. i can see mustards and horizons!

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