Promises

Deep into the forest
Lies a living dream
Those words that you carved,
A testament of love
Awaits,
A touch of fate,
Or may be,
An autumn leaf
To bring color to its morose life
The cold stone
Lingers on till eternity
Like those broken promises

A prompt by poefusion .. but not really satisfied by it
Advertisements

10 Comments

  1. Meena, why aren’t you satisfied with this? It’s an utterly poignant poem, that rushes into one with the hint of the bittersweet!
    It’s beautiful! And the picture too, that tells so very very much!

  2. liked the core

    A testament of love
    Awaits,
    A touch of fate,
    Or may be,
    An autumn leaf
    To bring color to its morose life

  3. šŸ˜€ Very Sweet !! lemme know when u finish it and u are satisfied .. That ll be a treat to dine šŸ˜€

  4. Liked the blog layout, the poem and the pic, not in any particular order though. :p
    Well, the poem is lovely..

    Thanks for dropping by friend.
    Wd try to visit hre again..

  5. what form is this?? or is it random??

    whatever it is, its beautiful…!!

    vinay.

    PS: am really satisfied by it!! šŸ˜€

  6. STORY OF MY LIFE… BROKEN PROMISES! YOU KNOW WHAT/WHOM I’M TALKING ABOUT, DON’T YOU? šŸ™‚

  7. pretty emotional and abstract:-) each line can be an independent standalone and yet they make collective sense too!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s