Lurking shadows, shifting light
What is it that you try to hide?
Layer upon layer, pretenses plied

Reasons decried, living in blight
Won’t you ever put up a fight?

Oh promise of future,the dream of morrow
Arise from this fugue and dispel forever,
This night of sorrow

Let this depraved world, revel in your might!
Soar high in the sky, like the wind and the kite

Behold! The dawn is yours !



  1. Wonderfull.
    Such inspirational work is hard to come by.
    Gr8 work, winnie.:)

  2. two words come to my mind,
    when i do see your thought,
    they are “just beautiful”,
    true till now, will be always,
    brilliance has always your poems sought.

  3. Winnie honey,
    You’ve been tagged by me for the eight things tag:)
    Lets see you do it:)

  4. a verse which starts with the ingredients of existential angst and ends in hope. i may want to come back though as my mind is playing pranks with analysis now. enjoyed it though!

    • yes you gauged it rightly 🙂

      In the first verse i was disappointed that we keep blaming n not r ready to take stance to change.. in second one.. i want to inspire them to do just that 🙂

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