Behold my
Ebullient passion
Wambling
Instinctively
Towards
Crescendo
Hold me close as I,
Enraptured
Dissolve into ripples of pleasure
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Bosom heaves
Errant heart beats
Weak knees
Instinctively capsize
Tyrant you smile
Captive me,
Hold breath for that-
Elusive
Decadent pleasure
Prompted by : Acrostic only
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These are both yummy
I like them both, Winnie. The word is hot!
Dissolve into ripples of pleasure. ooh, I like that
I think I liked the second one more… seemed naughtily passionate, and bore your signature a little more!
the first is aching and romantic.
i am not very fond of Acrostic…but the second one you penned is really breathing ,very well penned…good work